Yes Milti, I am interested so knock yourself out!
Also, I like your writing style. It just wouldn't have the Miltiades seal of authenticity if your writing style was edited or changed. But agree that it is easier with some well placed paragraphs.
Your Father in Law would have suffered tremendously as well. He is probably lucky to be alive as the Japanese were brutal.
For those interested, some good stuff here:
http://www.pows-of-japan.net/
I bet he told you a story or 2, or maybe he did not like talking about it.