B25 wrote:Excellent Milti, please continue.
bill cobbett wrote:B25 wrote:Excellent Milti, please continue.
Yes it is... but ...
please
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paras.
miltiades wrote:bill cobbett wrote:B25 wrote:Excellent Milti, please continue.
Yes it is... but ...
please
put
in
some
space
between
lines
and
paras.
Bill, paragraphs are.....old fashion, besides, real life stories need words that truly express ones experiences in life, fewer spaces and spontaneity !!
miltiades wrote:Back to the opening story and Maria.
I somehow knew that I hadn't heard the last of Maria.
An early morning email, firstly apologizing for the umpteenth time and finishing off with:" η καλοσύνη και η γενναιοδωρία σας θα παραμείνει στην καρδιά μου ώσπου την τελευταία μου ανάσα "
She goes on at length telling me of her dire financial difficulties in Greece, that with two children and still no work things are pretty desperate. She apparently says that the money she took from me she used to repay a loan she received from Greece in order to pay for her flight tickets and the rest went on essentials, overdue bills etc.
She does not directly ask for money but its evident that she is planning to do so, she obviously is hoping for a favourable response from me, she will not get it.
I have now deleted her contact details and will ignore further approaches.
I feel sorry for her but her initial act has left me with a very bitter taste, she played it wrong from the start by lying in order to extract money from me.
That will be the end of this real life story.
miltiades wrote:Back to the opening story and Maria.
I somehow knew that I hadn't heard the last of Maria.
An early morning email, firstly apologizing for the umpteenth time and finishing off with:" η καλοσύνη και η γενναιοδωρία σας θα παραμείνει στην καρδιά μου ώσπου την τελευταία μου ανάσα "
She goes on at length telling me of her dire financial difficulties in Greece, that with two children and still no work things are pretty desperate. She apparently says that the money she took from me she used to repay a loan she received from Greece in order to pay for her flight tickets and the rest went on essentials, overdue bills etc.
She does not directly ask for money but its evident that she is planning to do so, she obviously is hoping for a favourable response from me, she will not get it.
I have now deleted her contact details and will ignore further approaches.
I feel sorry for her but her initial act has left me with a very bitter taste, she played it wrong from the start by lying in order to extract money from me.
That will be the end of this real life story.
Kikapu wrote:miltiades wrote:bill cobbett wrote:B25 wrote:Excellent Milti, please continue.
Yes it is... but ...
please
put
in
some
space
between
lines
and
paras.
Bill, paragraphs are.....old fashion, besides, real life stories need words that truly express ones experiences in life, fewer spaces and spontaneity !!
I think Bill's comments are well intended my friend, that by using the type of writing he's suggesting, it would be more pleasant to the eyes, which would then draw the reader into your story deeper, line by line.
If I may use drinking a wine analogy, which you know a thing or two about, it is much more enjoyable to drink wine out of a wine glass than out of the bottle all at once.
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