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by **fig head** » Thu Jan 27, 2011 5:52 pm

Lets go for a walk

Let me Hold your hand, let me hear you talk

Let me breathe your world and in you soak

Let me let you grow in me

Show me how love can be

Invade me, break me but make sure before you kill me that you truly love me.

Be who ever you want to be

But when you come back to me, remember that you is me

So before you go let us go for a walk

And take my hand as you talk

And remember when you had enough

And you Find out without me you aint that tough

You`ll come back looking for us

But you might find what was left is just damaged stuff

So Before you go and break my heart

Im telling you are not that smart

And im not waiting around sweetheart

by **pretty-as-pink** » Thu Jan 27, 2011 6:43 pm

Bravo, very good

by **Cap** » Thu Jan 27, 2011 7:00 pm

Nice.
Here's one. Short and sweet.

'Your hair is winter fire
January embers
my heart burns there, too'

Stephen King- 'IT'

by **pretty-as-pink** » Thu Jan 27, 2011 7:03 pm

Explain........

by **Cap** » Thu Jan 27, 2011 7:10 pm

pretty-as-pink wrote:Explain........

Was a love poem written by a smitten 12 year old to a girl he was head over heels in love with. She incidentally knew nothing of it.

by **Cap** » Thu Jan 27, 2011 7:22 pm

Since I'm now feeling a tad nostalgic, my mind is drifting to that super 80's era, where big hair was the norm and rock ballads were the rage.

Great lyrics, great musicianship

by **wyoming cowboy** » Thu Jan 27, 2011 8:18 pm

What do you guys think of this poem ? kind of long but and unorganized but nevertheless....you judge

....You my love who beats in my chest so brave and loud. Who screams of freedom and love for all things. Yet I only choose to hear your visions in tiny threads...You are the one who begs me to dance wildly in the moonlit desert sand while you promise to hum your sweet tunes..You my love have the courage to see me dancing in the desert to see beads of sweat pour out of me until i turned to water. “Oh my sweet love” I always cry back, give me courage that goes beyond what i see in front of me today, for your courage my love will carry me away, high high above the bonds of this day.
Your courage my sweet- heart- gives me wings for which to soar around the world in order to find comfort for my soul. The desert heat so hot the salty sweat burns my lips and tongue, I swirl wildly in my cowboy hat dancing in the hot desert sun..I have bliss in my heart....
You free me again through my dreams and with sweat pouring and dancing free, you plunge me into the cool Aegean sea...and again you fill me with bliss....You show me the depths of the Sea, you dare me to stay i inhale the foaming sea and you, the goddess of love and lust, Aphrodite is there for me to see ...The salty water burns my tongue and lips, while Aphrodite’s glare holds all of me..The perfect form of a woman, she reaches through the sea to touch my salty lips.. she moves closer to me as i hear her evil hiss....You my love my heart are again in total bliss..Aphrodite’s lips caress my face and she finds my lips, so sweet her lips do taste deep below the salty sea...and for an instant , i see you mylove, through my sweet tender heart, this body these bones that we carry are not enough they are merely a mask..this body in that blink of an eye,didnt even feel that it was mine. The only thing that felt truly to be me was my one and only love, my heart..I saw her dancing in that instant dancing wildly on a cloud with her friend,the sun....