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Last Resort- by Fig

Postby fig head » Tue Apr 20, 2010 7:31 pm

she is wearing blue

she is walking alone

she is trying to keep the voices down

she know she can mute their whispers

but she cant shut down the screams

she cant stop them from growling

like animals been in the dark for ages

they are caged, chained with metal

they park like wild dogs inside her head

they wanna get out, they wanna be freed

and she is fighting in silence

she is fighting her demons alone

she is fighting her own thoughts

they weep and cry for her to give them space in her mind

to take them out of the dark and admetting they are a part of her

but she fighting every day to keep them mute, to drown them in the sea of her thoughts.

to ignore them, she knows they are evil they are angry

they have been prisoners for long they are able to do bad things

she is so scared, she is frightined YET she struggle to keep it all inside her head

she knows its part of her, the evil, she knows she made them exist

she know they say the things she refuse to say

they are full of rage for everything she never get angry for when she had the right to.

and she is there, everyday is the same, everything is the same

people look the same, every day`s details is the same

she runs in an empty circle of hell

she sleep to dream of a change and wake up to the same reality

she cant run away and she cant find a place to hide from her self

she is always with her self, she cant just kill that part of her

she cant draw aline between whats good and whats bad in her

she cant pick sides, even if she did pick a side and announced a war she gonna be fighting her self and she will lose, she cant defeat her self

but she know what to do know, she was shown the light

she will kill her thoughts and refuse to listen to them thoughts

and if she didnt win the battle, she will kill her self and put an end to her life

killing with her them voices and she wishes to rest in peace

she is broken and she know that she can not be fixed

she is so tired, she has lost her powers

lost her well and her right to decide

she was judged to die for the crime of being her.
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well thats my poem !

its emo poem(good thing i didnt make my character cut or burn her self lol)

hope u all like it
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Postby CBBB » Tue Apr 20, 2010 7:47 pm

What does your psychiatrist think about it?
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Postby fig head » Tue Apr 20, 2010 8:29 pm

CBBB wrote:What does your psychiatrist think about it?


:shock: :shock: this is art !!!
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Postby paliometoxo » Tue Apr 20, 2010 9:00 pm

an lovely read, ty for posting it
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Postby fig head » Tue Apr 20, 2010 9:01 pm

paliometoxo wrote:an lovely read, ty for posting it


here is some one who appreciate real art..

u welcome palio mou
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Postby denizaksulu » Tue Apr 20, 2010 9:42 pm

Nice and expressive words Emma.

Let us have some more. I can see you write with a lot of feeling.

Shoukraniyat
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Postby Hazza » Tue Apr 20, 2010 9:44 pm

Excellent read, straight from the heart. Well done Emma!
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Postby fig head » Wed Apr 21, 2010 7:48 am

i have tears in my eyes now ! m happy you liked it

im happy i liked it lol, i get so emotional when i write emo poems
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Postby Paphitis » Wed Apr 21, 2010 7:55 am

Nice poem, and very creative.

Keep it up! :)
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Postby Gasman » Wed Apr 21, 2010 9:12 am

Well done fig. Takes guts to post your own work on an open forum.
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