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Inside the mind of a machine. part 3 Peter is gone.

Postby fig head » Thu Apr 01, 2010 8:28 am

Two weeks gone by quite, there wasnt any weird events, every thing was peacefull, Dr.William Blackwell and his Friend Peter was invading the social events all over the city, they went to Rachels wine party and as everyone noticed both of them were in their best behaviour if not the life of the party, they had matching suits on witch little bit funny and they both didnt drink,

both of them spent a great deal of time with Goldie, both of them truelly loved her, Goldie was a beautiful girl who made everyone fall in love with her, weird enough she had the same golden hair as peter do ! it was funny how smilier does she looks like Peter, even Lezzy made a comment or two about that.

Williams father organized a big party for Peter. it was funny even william didnt understand why would his father have a party of the name of Peter, it was sort of suspecious to him he wasnt comfortable but he had to go as the whole city was invited, from every banker in the city to every shop owner , even the governer was invited.

just before the party Peter seemed in pain he and William was just outside the Big house William fathers “sir Edmond Blackwell” owns.

they both seems to the strange eye as if they having a serious conversation or may be even a fight, while the guests stepped in one by one into the massive house of Edmond they could hear few words out of William and Peter loud conversation.

William: its not supposed to be now, something is wrong i thought i had it all right.

Peter: well we have to fix it before i start being useless

William: for god sake Peter we will have to just go through this night and you know i will not let this happen, im sorry i shouldnt have..

Peter stopped him saying the words when he saw sir Edmond walking towards them with a big happy smile on his face,

“here is my son and our party man , good evening Peter i hope you like your party, so get your self inside” Edmond said

“i wouldnt be able to thank you enough for welcoming me into your lovely family sir” said Peter and the three of them walked together to the inside of the house with completely different face expressions, William seemed lost in his own mind while Peter looked nervous though they both tried their best not to show anything and had their fake smiles on their handsome faces.

the party went on , all the ladies wearing very interesting dresses .

Rachel “Lezzy`s sister” walked to where Peter and William standing in the corner of the massive living room and greeted them in such manners then looked to Peter and said” so Peter how you find it being part of the family”

“i have i dont disappointe you im happy to be surrounded by all of my darling” Peter replyed

Rachel in such provoking manner stepped closer to Peter and whispered in his ears ” they all seems like proper ladies and gentelmen dear, dont be fool im sure someone will love to show you how we can be when we arent behaving” then she winked to him giving him a dirty look that doesnt go along with how a lady should speaks.

he understood what she meant and smiled to her then he said “i see you have a lovely dress Rachel im sure you the one that makes this dress looks beautiful”

while smoking her ciggaret she blows the smoke with a sexy smile and said “you hear about this wonderfull places that have the material for such dresses and people kill their locals to get them and make me, us beautiful dresses, it must be worth it. dont you think. yet i will be glad to let you handle my dress haha”

Peter playing her game stepped closer to her and put his hand on the upper part of her dress and touched her nick with his longer finguers then whgispered in her ears “that should be lot of fun my dear”

the sound of sir Edmond rising up made everyone look to his direction while he stood their with a glass of wine in his hand and he said “im glad everyone was able to honor me by accepting the my invitations, you know you all welcome here and you all good friends of me and my family, tonight i would like to welcome a new member of our family, who he broght us all together today, Peter, lets all drink for Peter “looking to him with an appreciating look” since Peter met my son William , he was the reason to bring him back the person we all love the person we all cant imagine living without and for that i welcome you Peter to be one my family and a son to me, i hope you will be happy staying with us.” then he raised his glass up high and said here is for Peter my son and drank his drink.

everyone was happy and looking for Peter to say something , Peter couldnt ignore the eys on him so we walked to the middle of the big room and said ” you know im not good with words but all what i can say that i feel blessed to be part of this wonderfull family, i hope i wont be going any where now that i do have a family” then he raised his hand with his glass of “water” and said here is for William my best friend who i awe him my life and for sir Edmond to the great man he is.

after along night of pretending and faking the party was over abd everyone start to part away.

back in the house of Williams, Peter looked more in pain, William caled for the maid and told her to not let anyone in the house no matter what. and he in a soft way came close to her and held her hand and asked her, “can you keep everyone out of the house. please im going back to my lab and im depending on you”

the maid was shocked that William had held her hand, she was confused yet she always knew she would do any thing for this man, her face blushed flown in her body racing in her vains, she feared the way his words meant yet she nodded with respect and understanding, she knew he is going back to hs lab.

both of them men disappeared into the lab and she heared the locks one by one on the door, then for hourse everything was silent witch some how made her feel a little bit of comfort,

2 days had been like hell to the maid, trying to give excused on where is William and Peter to everyone who asks and the knocks on the door havent stopped, friends and family even Lezzy and Goldie had been in couple of time and the made cant say where are they she cant even tell them they are in the house in their lab she understand that if she did William will yet again disappoint his family anthats why she was telling lies even though William havent gone that far and asked her to lie for him, yet he and Peter now was her responsability and its her job to do as her master said exactly.

in the 3rd day she woke up in the middle of the night jumbing on the sound of screams coming from the lab, she heard William and Peter screaming in agony she ran down the stairs from her room in the corner of the second floor and saw light that looks like thunder coming out of under the door of the lab.

“sir William, sir William are you allright, sir William do you hear me” said the maid

the screamed vanished, the lights all gone and the lab door opined suddenly and she on;y saw glimps of fire inside the dark lab and saw William trying to put it off but whgat she didnt see is Peter yet she couldnt have looked deep in the lab she is looking from behind the door, William screamed at her to go away and she did ran as fast as she can to hide in her room filled with fear.

the next morning arrived and as early as usual she went downstairs to for her shock found William lying on the floor next to the lab, he was unconcious, his clothes was all cutted and dirty, his hand had burn marks and trhe lab was again closed with all the locks.

she ran to him held him between her arms and shaked him whispering his name without sir

“William dear, please wake up , wake up William” the maid said

William opined his eyes and he was unable to move so she with all her strength held him up and tried to woke him to his room, his arms on her shoulders while she holding his body to balance her short moves, thinking, he is really heavy.

william getting back his conciousness didnt say anything but only looked to her with sad tured eyes a look that says thank you and helped her by walking slowly up the stairs, she tokje his dirty clothes of while he seemed like he is in a different world and put him in his bed.

in a shakey voice she then looked to the floor with a red face and said “i will make you breakfast and some tea sir, please dont move and try to rest”

back in less than 20 minutes with breakfast and tea , she knocked in his room but he didnt answer so she went in and found him a sleep, he looked very inocent, she put his breakfast n the table next to the bed and coverd him up then she stared at his face with love and passion yet sadness and a tear of her eye without permission fell down on his hair, she stepped closer and sat next to him as if she talking to him when she knew he wouldnt be listening.

“i will not ask questions, i will not even think of questioning you, i believe in you as i always did and i know Peter is saved what ever happend inside that gloomy lab, i know you wont hurt him or any body and as much as i cant stop wondering where Peter might have gone and when i have my faith and my believes that only you svaed him before when i 1st saw him coming out of this lab and only you will save him. she kissed his forehead. i pray for you dear William , i pray for you , and i will be here fighting my fear if that would be ever a little bit of help to you” said the maid

she then moved quitelly out of his room and went to her room to cry, she knew that Dr.Blackwell again will disappear from the world, she knew he gonna hide in his lab from the world and she knew its her job again to be the only person who see him suffering, yet she cant understand why did Peter left him, she knew Peter was a stranger , he must sneaked in the 1st time she saw him into the house, but why would he leave without saying good bye, he made friends and everyone loved him .. she hated the secrecy sorounding Peter but she knew it wont be the last weird thing she know as long as she lived in the same house as William does.

she will do what ever she can and cant for this ,man who doesnt know her but she know that her master wouldnt look at her, she is a maid while all the pretty women in their fancy dresses trying to get him,

she is such a sad person she thinks..

to be contenued.

Peter is gone.
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