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cheers
To Whom It May Concern
It is with great regret that I am sending you this e-mail. I am here to express my disappointment in reading that German parliamentarians are flying into Cyprus using the illegal ercan airport in the occupied territory of the Island of Cyprus.
This action is not only disrespectful for the Cypriot people in general but also the government of Cyprus.
Furthermore, it validates Turkish propaganda, violation of Human Rights of thousands of refugees who have lost their homes and it contradicts the foundation of the EU.
It also contradicts and makes the EU requests of Turkey to open its ports and airports to Cypriot vessels, hypocritical.
As a person whose ancestral home is occupied by someone without our consent I find this action disrespectful and disregarding of my existence. I know that it is difficult to understand such a concept if you are not affected but please try.
There is no doubt in my mind at least that Turkish speaking Cypriots have the right to share equal opportunities and rights within the Island, and I welcome such a move to allow them to do so. I welcome their right to co-exist in the State of Cyprus and by this I mean all of it, the occupied area is not theirs to occupy solemly and certainly not at the expense of other Cypriots.
Your intervention to prevent the disrespectful un-compassionate German parliamentarians from supporting illegal and occupationary forces currently occupying 1/3 of the Island would be appreciated.