by Filitsa » Sun Aug 12, 2007 3:33 am
Dear Mr. Get Real!,
I've read some posts in which you engage in the unsolicted critiquing of the English language usage of certain members of this forum, particularly those for whom English is not their first language. Consequently, I've gathered that you take pride in your mastery of the language. With this in mind and with all due respect, permit me to point out a matter of incorrect pronoun-antecedent agreement in number in your sentence quoted below.
"IMHO, there is only one member that fits the description to a "T" but it's not a good idea to hurt their feelings by advertising it here."
"Member" is the antecedent noun to the plural pronoun "their." "Member" is a singular noun. Therefore, its corresponding pronoun should be singular, not plural. Correct usage would include "his," "her," or "his/her."
Additionally, a noun is a person, place, thing, idea, or event. Whereas "member" is a noun that falls into the person category, the subordinating conjunction "that," which refers to a thing, should be corrected to the interrogative pronoun "who," which refers to a person.
A comma is also required before the coordinating conjuction "but" because it joins in one sentence two complete thoughts who could otherwise stand alone as sentences.
I hope this lesson is of benefit to you. I provide it, of course, with the best of intentions.
Regards.
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Filitsa on Sun Aug 12, 2007 3:52 am, edited 2 times in total.